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we're not compatible

oh waayyyy too much trouble

between you and me

just a casualty

of 2 broken hearts

it's plain to see.

?

oh so much more than a fling

oh this was the real thing

from the heights of dizzy passion

our hearts filled with emotion

hurtling down to a crash landing

where there was no nice soft cushion

?

no man is an island

yet i felt lost and abandoned

after the crashing and burning

it was my soul that was hurting

and you too my love

twas our hearts that were bleeding

?

i painted a picture

of you and me

you and your powers of persuasion

me and my potty thoughts of heaven

you and me

all was rosey in our garden

?

in my dreams we were forever

my man, my husband, my lover

but we are most incompatible

and so there went our little bubble

and there were the shattered pieces

of our dream laid bare, just a pile of rubble

?

the sweetest love i have known

with you my love i have flown

to the wonderous heights of love

all the while trying to keep above

the looming uncertainty

that our love was doomed to fail

it wasn't to be for eternity

?

i bid you farewell

from one long lost soul

to another

my friend, be well,

be true and be safe

i hope you find what you're looking for............x



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ha here's a rough little sketch of summat I just wrote........ I might try to make it rhyme all the way through. dunno yet. anyway here it is.

oh how i first found the man to be
untamed, wild and unsocial
always seemed to have this bee
in his bonnet and always ranting
and he wasn't afraid to be vocal
about all his pet hates and loathing
of mobile phones, alcohol and pubbing
he hated litter bugs and anti social behaviour
which therin lay a contradiction
see he was always so antisocial
down to his way of life as the hermit
and there was always so much conflict
between us it drove us mad
i broke down and cried
cos of his meanand petty mindedness
the man seemed almost completely friendless
i laugh now when i think
of that wretched ear bashing creature
from the wilderness of isolation
the cold headed being that lacked the warmth
from another head to sooth his mind
and wash away the fraughtness
built up over the years of aloneness
the hermit left to his own peril
a bleak looking future never finding
the thing he wanted to the most
to be comforted and loved
by the woman he eventually found
and who turned the wretched beast
into a kind and loving soul
who won her heart nonetheless
despite the fighting and grief
the endless ups and downs
the rollercoaster ride
that seemed would go on forever and ever
but they managed to find the keys
to eachothers hearts and love abounded
never before had they met their match
but now love holds true and captures
their minds as well as their hearts
as they look into the future together
no more aloneness and isolation
just deep love and affection now bonds them.


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away with the fairies I said
I said it about my own head
that's what I say to you now
but the real question is how
am I different from you
because how can I possibly have a clue
about a world when I haven't even read
before the things that I think up in my head
seems everyone else only repeats
things they've been told which beats
anything they could think for themselves
since we just don't expect to understand
the whole complex mess of this land

then one pops up and says 'hey'
I got this great idea that I play
over in my head it goes like this
this system is taking the piss
out of you out of me don't you see
sure most know that's a certainty
but do they really really comprehend
that all main parties are a dead end?

who sees how wholly dependent
it all is on the fat cats abundant
up there at the top of the chain
where they reap havoc and cause so much pain
who sees that the more that we tax 'em
the more we rely on a continued cycle of bedlam
the insanity of this economic nightmare
where we're enslaved and stripped back bare
of the integrity to think for ourselves

yeh sure tax em more
cos well that's the law
it makes it more fair
and all the while do they care?
that we're eating into their trap
and they lick their lips and clap
cos we've given them total control
and we have to support their role
as players for world domination
we can't stop them cos it ****s the system
now we're wholly dependent
on the beast hell bent
on taking over
us, the common worker.



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just had a little trip
in my head just a blip
a glimpse of what could be
when the fat cats grab all the money
then kill everyone else left with nothing
the thought of what it could all bring
when only the richest are left
as they consider themselves so deft
laughing in the face of the dead
we've turned it round on its head!
cos we're all bloody rich now!
it really doesn't matter how!
there aint a poor person in sight
cos they've all now met their plight.
oh yes socialism is alive!
for now it can begin to thrive!

haha

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i decided to stay up half the night
in the stillness of the dark hours
i play my music gentle and light
when i tap into the slient powers
of the sleeping energy around me
so tranquil, and peaceful
like one floating soulful entity
spirits alive and passed bountiful

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As the world rubs its eyes awakening
another day dawns and time for working
it gets washed dressed and on the train
all the while disguising it's tired pain
of having to work all bloody week
and having to travel during peak

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you're getting above your station
pitching above your weight
you're no great saviour of salvation
your thinking is not great
what makes you think that you see
something more than tv
why do you think that you have the answer
we'll laugh when you fall over
the one who thought she knew
the way forward for humanity
insults the peoples integrity
as though she alone could know
as she puts on her little show
we'll laugh as her ideas go nowhere
as if she could know better than me
like she had some kind of phd
nah feel her to the wolves i say
people like her arent worth the time of day
just another nutjob
with much too much gob
lol

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i know the loneliness,
i know how it feels,
to cry amongst the emptiness,
your soul suffering as it reels
in an agony all by yourself
i'm glad that we met
as we comfort and understand
food for the soul was meant
to give us a helping hand

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