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I am just about to make up a poem about something I got into a discussion with myself about earlier. I am going to type it as I think it:

 

Is London Still Punk?

Is it ****!

more down****ingtrodden

spirit of punk long forgotten

wake up you!

You aint got a clue!

where is your punk?

where is that spunk?

latent and repressed

dormant and oppressed

one day you gotta break

be alive and get awake!

you're so tamed and controlled

struggling to make it happen

all the while being downtrodden

by a system that ****s you over

tryin to find your lucky clover

that don't exist by the way

so you just go about your day

there aint no ****ing future

have you got the ****ing picture?

there is no house, only debt,

and all you have done is wept

about your **** situation

and it's shared by half the nation

crumpled dispirited and folorn

grieving and mourning

a world that WAS dawning

alive, raw and vibrant

loud, noisy and so fervent

raw energy, busting out of the seams

in the face of the capitalist dreams

was it all just a tragedy

that hot unbridled energy

was it all just a negative?

or was it all positive

the start or the end?

or really round the bend?!

 

 

 

 



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I think i'll do another poem hmmm ok here goes...

I don't like to say the word hate
I don't want hate to be my fate
but sometimes I really hate all the people
who themselves hate all the people
that are rich and famous beyond measure
but I know that don't make me clever

but sometimes I hate the stupid planks
the ignorant thick useless wanks
who aint got the class to know better
and who just couldn't be any wetter
than to shout get the rich bastards
and no wes I'm not bloody plastered!

the stupid ****ing morons
get em to all suck some bonbons
so their teeth get glued together
with that sticky orrible texture
then they'll have to all be silent
and then I can make them more compliant

cos the truth is its not their money and fame
that makes a person the one to blame
its a system that that keeps people down
so if there's anything to cause a frown
it should be the rules that a gung ho capitalist state
has laid down so heavy we all feel their weight

heavy on our shoulders, the burdensome effect
of the giant corporations, we need to correct
the constraints of big business that keep us
from being equal and respectful and so thus
we must let our side grow in comparison
to the big corporates and reverse the corrosion

the state is there for the people or should be
so it needs to be fully functioning so that we
can stand up and be counted, so let our state
grow and develop into being for us before its too late
I know this stupid poem is crap ok?
but I'm tired and goin to bed now, so I gues that's it for now.







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ah no when I said 'capitalist state' that reads kinda wonky

cos I actually believe in state capitalism

but in the poem what I meant to describe is a state that's only capitalist for big business and not for the peope


I read recently that engels reckoned that state capitalism would provide the tools with which to bring about socialism

what I been banging on about

I'm tired of beign the only one on this planet

no one takes me seriously cos I'm just a daft middle aged pleb that talks to herself being a nob



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I am a fat ****
always avin a chat
with myself on the bloody net
yes its always a safe bet
that I will bang on about an idea
which to others is so unclear
but to me a very clear vision
a way to a utopian heaven

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